I tried to edit your paper but somehow I ended up creating my own version of your paper on accident but here is the link with my edits on your paper. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r9SSqP8kNDmMcN0RWno-FfrkvJSz2At1ZyKk4_Szs2U/edit I liked your paper a lot. It had clear points that were well supported.
I tried to edit your paper but somehow I ended up creating my own version of your paper on accident but here is the link with my edits on your paper.
ReplyDeletehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1r9SSqP8kNDmMcN0RWno-FfrkvJSz2At1ZyKk4_Szs2U/edit
I liked your paper a lot. It had clear points that were well supported.